Nice Idea
I Liked the idea of the flash. Its like a personal interview.
As for the music
I read one of your responses to someone else that youve only been playing for a year and a half to 2 or something to that extent. All I have to say is keep working on it, its sounds good for where you are. Trust me, you will get better and better as time progresses, as long as you stay diligent and perservere. I am in 4 bands, and i know what it is like to have assholes tell you that you suck and shit. Tell them to kiss your ass and move on. Dont take what they say for a grain of salt.
Sound Issues. I Suggest you get a Tascam US-428 or a Tascam US-224. (I think it is 224, i dunno, all i have is the 428) These are really good for recording.
Keep working on it! Never give up.
RaaveK